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That was the start,
was it not also the end
of it all, my friend?

Scolded by winter:
Only you had to come my way,
unwanted in many a visit
I  asked if you’d like to stay.
So we ran out of luck the next morning
and set out together into a new day.

And we became close,
my loving light to guide you,
your songs to set us free;

Then came those ghosts:
jealousy and curiousity ended you,
listening to the silence of your heart
as the tracks beat their evening song,
so long,
so long...
©2009 ~Amuris
:iconamuris:

Author's Comments

#1316/Ins14

Man, did I have fun writing this yesterday! :D

Inspired by: A short Comic by :iconkazzer-doom:

The title was inspired by the T. Englehardt on the window; hidden symbolic? You decide. :#1:

(If I may ask the artist: would you mind if I used a frame of your comic as a preview image?)

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:iconwayward-man:
Wow...nicely done. ^^

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The world spins while I lie still...
:iconquicksilver1:
wow. I love the imagery of this. very nice.

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may the wind be at your back, and the sun shine upon your face, and may the road of life lead you to where you truly belong.
:icontristaselene:
I love this. It is very well done. :hug:

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"Death is peaceful, painless. Life is hard."
:iconamuris:
Thanks. ^^

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:work:
“If inspiration you seek, find it within your heart, within your soul... Not your mind. What you see, what you write, will become real!”
“Until such a time as I may pass this way again... Fairwell.” - Leo Fox
:love: ~autumn4whispers
:iconamuris:
Why, thank you. :bow:

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:work:
“If inspiration you seek, find it within your heart, within your soul... Not your mind. What you see, what you write, will become real!”
“Until such a time as I may pass this way again... Fairwell.” - Leo Fox
:love: ~autumn4whispers
:iconamuris:
:D

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:work:
“If inspiration you seek, find it within your heart, within your soul... Not your mind. What you see, what you write, will become real!”
“Until such a time as I may pass this way again... Fairwell.” - Leo Fox
:love: ~autumn4whispers
:icontristaselene:
Your Welcome.

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"Death is peaceful, painless. Life is hard."
:iconnoir-phoenix-phantom:
this is really good stuff right here! Fun to read too!amazing.. :meow:

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Between Love and War, War will End,
Between Love and War, Love is my Friend.
Between Love and War, Death will still feed,
Between Love and War, New things will seed.
Love is the sheild to which guards our hearts,
War is the field where all wars start MJH
:iconamuris:
This one was a special obstacle. Took me nearly three months to write it out, finding the rhythm for each panel. So I stuck with the short and most symbolic in the hopes that it won't run out of sparkle. :XD:

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:work:
“If inspiration you seek, find it within your heart, within your soul... Not your mind. What you see, what you write, will become real!”
“Until such a time as I may pass this way again... Fairwell.” - Leo Fox
:love: ~autumn4whispers

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